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Blurred hands streaking through the water. Despret the break the surface. Eager to feel that salty air.

Just missed.

Just missed...


Frantic kicking followed suit. Bubbles flowing to the darkening surface.

Can't die here...

Can't die here!


The moon...It looks so beautiful under the cursed water...The way it danced across the surface...

Can't feel anything...

Can't...move...


Jade eyes shone through the blackness that started to consume him. Pale muzzle and black bags under his eyes. Sleep deprived no more. Was he to die here..?

Shadow...

"Shadow-Kun..." he mouthed, bubbled filltering out from between his pale lips.

His late thoughts...Why did he love him so...? Why did he risk his life for the black hedgehog...? Cold hands squeezed his body, depriving him of any air he had left. His mind screaming for him to at least try to make it to the surface. But he knew he couldn't. The amount of chaos energy in his body weighed him down dramatically. Like throwing a stone in a pool.

He raised a slow hand towards the shimmering moon. As if silently praying for a rescuer. For something to bring him out of the cold abyss.

Inhaling another lungful of water, his eyes widened in reflex from the pain of his aching chest. His risen hand slowly grasped his throat as if trying to stop himself from inhaling. But on instinct he did it again. He curled forward, eyes wide and coated in pain. Not for himself. No. He wasn't that selfish. No.

For Shadow.

He couldn't let Shadow be alone. Not again. He'd already lost someone close to him. He couldn't let him go through it again. He couldn't.

He wouldn't!

He slowly ungrasped his throat in shock. Was that...wh..was that really...? He blinked slowly with his blurred vision as a blue emerald slowly floated down and bumped into his chest gently. His eyes softened as he gently held it.

He tried to chaos control.

He really did.

But he had no air left to utter a single sound. His eyes widened as they fell empty. Clutching the emereld as tightly as he could, his eyes slowly flickered shut. The moon's light shining down on him.

Shadow-Kun....
WHOA! I actually wrote a story on my own! 8D Well a prologue anyway XD I dunno, this idea was stuck in my head for a while. After seeing Rise of the Guardians ^^ I wanted to make something similar except Sonic is Jack 8D And Shadow can see him ^^ Although im not sure what the full storyline can be XD

Would someone like to help me plot it abit? Its a Sonadow if you can't tell XD

Also it needs a better name XD
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Flamemon3254 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
This sound like a good story, you should try making it, Title: Sonic Guardian or Sonic: Rise of the Guardian.
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Xbox-DS-Gameboy Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
My inspiration for this kinda died cause I find it really hard to write stories alone ;~; I normally write with my friends.
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SONADOwwerehogs Featured By Owner May 24, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Shadow bunny, knuckles north, tails sandy, this one will be weird silver tooth and egghead pitch
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SONADOwwerehogs Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Plz continue
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Skyebloodwillow Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014
Please finish! Here some ideas.
jack-sonic
Shadow could be bunny
Knuckles could be north
Tails could be sandy
Amy could be tooth
Eggman could be pitch 
shadow, knuckles, tails, and Amy save the world from eggman.
instead of a dark age their was a dead age which was a short time that eggman ruled before the guardians( shadow, tails, Amy, and knuckles) defeated him.  
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TitaniaSylvette Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
My gawwdd...!!!!! Where's the previous one! I want ti read it!!! Well if there is no previous, CONTINUE THIS STOOOORRRYYY!!! Its so awesome...
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:iconxbox-ds-gameboy:
Xbox-DS-Gameboy Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD Im trying to figure out the plot ^^;
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TitaniaSylvette Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Cant wait! Cant wait! CANT WAIT!!! X3
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merlinfrostG Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014
Please continued this story!!! It's so good!
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:iconxbox-ds-gameboy:
Xbox-DS-Gameboy Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Once I figure out the plot, I will ^^
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AwsomeRainbowDash Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Continue plz!! :iconmoarplz: I think Shadow should be the Easter Bunny!!! XD
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:iconxbox-ds-gameboy:
Xbox-DS-Gameboy Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD
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AwsomeRainbowDash Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
The Easter Bunny was serious and short tempered in the movie!!
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:iconxbox-ds-gameboy:
Xbox-DS-Gameboy Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD Silver would be the SandMan and Tails could be the Tooth Fairy XP
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AwsomeRainbowDash Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha! But I'm Not sure about Tails being the Tooth Fairy... I know!!! Knuckles as Santa Clause!!!
And Mephelies as Pitch Black?
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Xbox-DS-Gameboy Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh yush~
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AwsomeRainbowDash Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Are we forgetting someone?
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:iconxbox-ds-gameboy:
Xbox-DS-Gameboy Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Jamie
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CarmenIsCrazy Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013  Student Photographer
Pls continue! Annnnndddd............. I think Sonic Hedgehog Frost sounds more like it XP nah kidding! Sonic Frost sounds good enough!
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Xbox-DS-Gameboy Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you :)
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CarmenIsCrazy Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2013  Student Photographer
Your Welcome!
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Soniclover32801 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG I LOVE THIS YOU REALLY NEED TO CONTINUE THIS
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:iconxbox-ds-gameboy:
Xbox-DS-Gameboy Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I know :) I plan to. Im plotting it out and trying to think of a title
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Soniclover32801 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:) ok umm is it like a sonadow?
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:iconxbox-ds-gameboy:
Xbox-DS-Gameboy Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Im trying to plan it that way :3
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Soniclover32801 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:3
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fluffythehedgehog12 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG please continue this! I use read it and its already awesome!
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Xbox-DS-Gameboy Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Im plotting it out :)
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fluffythehedgehog12 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yay!
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:iconfluffythehedgehog12:
fluffythehedgehog12 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Okay, great! I'm looking forward to it!
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:iconxbox-ds-gameboy:
Xbox-DS-Gameboy Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Im glad at least someone is enjoying the teaser XD
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iwubprussia Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013
YAY!!!
love Sonic games and love Jack Frost!!!
please continue!!!!
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Xbox-DS-Gameboy Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I plan to after I get Rise of the Guardians on DVD next month :)
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WhirlwindTheHedgehog Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is really good! Even thought I haven't even seen RotG, this still gave me chills :wow:

Would be amazing if you continued this!
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Xbox-DS-Gameboy Featured By Owner Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Im writing the plot as we speak :)
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ChibiChibiWoofWoof Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013
This is actually really awesome X3 I wanna see more :iconbegplz: XD
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Xbox-DS-Gameboy Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks bud 8D
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ChibiChibiWoofWoof Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013
no worries X3
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yesenix Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
PLEASE CONTINUE !!!!! XD I LOVE IT :3
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Xbox-DS-Gameboy Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'll try my best :)
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yesenix Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
X333 oki
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spd243 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Student Artist
this is awesome so far ^^ Can't wait to read more ^^

hmm....another title for Sonic frost though...
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Xbox-DS-Gameboy Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I need a basic plot line too XD like where can I go from here? What's the goal and the middle
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spd243 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Student Artist
hmm maybe now talking about how Sonic bumps into Shadow maybe?
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Xbox-DS-Gameboy Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I was thinking Sonic could see Shadow and since Shadow is immortal he follows him around everywhere. Then he tries to make himself be seen. But I need a story. Or should I end it with sonadow fluffiness? XD I kinda wanted action and adventure too
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spd243 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Student Artist
that's good so far ^^

hmm...maybe as Shadow begins to see him, further along deep in the story they have some fight and Shadow thinks that the Sonic he sees is an illusion and that's when Sonic has to prove himself that he is ther for him.
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Xbox-DS-Gameboy Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That'd be a cute scene ^^ so should I base this story on Shadow and Sonic or make it bigger then that?
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spd243 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Student Artist
that's good for until u want to make the plot bigger
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:iconxbox-ds-gameboy:
Xbox-DS-Gameboy Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I wanna plan ahead so I don't get writers block XD I haven't written a decent story on my own in a while ^^;
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Songal Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013
Yes! Continue!!
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