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Blurred hands streaking through the water. Despret the break the surface. Eager to feel that salty air.

Just missed.

Just missed...

Frantic kicking followed suit. Bubbles flowing to the darkening surface.

Can't die here...

Can't die here!

The moon...It looks so beautiful under the cursed water...The way it danced across the surface...

Can't feel anything...


Jade eyes shone through the blackness that started to consume him. Pale muzzle and black bags under his eyes. Sleep deprived no more. Was he to die here..?


"Shadow-Kun..." he mouthed, bubbled filltering out from between his pale lips.

His late thoughts...Why did he love him so...? Why did he risk his life for the black hedgehog...? Cold hands squeezed his body, depriving him of any air he had left. His mind screaming for him to at least try to make it to the surface. But he knew he couldn't. The amount of chaos energy in his body weighed him down dramatically. Like throwing a stone in a pool.

He raised a slow hand towards the shimmering moon. As if silently praying for a rescuer. For something to bring him out of the cold abyss.

Inhaling another lungful of water, his eyes widened in reflex from the pain of his aching chest. His risen hand slowly grasped his throat as if trying to stop himself from inhaling. But on instinct he did it again. He curled forward, eyes wide and coated in pain. Not for himself. No. He wasn't that selfish. No.

For Shadow.

He couldn't let Shadow be alone. Not again. He'd already lost someone close to him. He couldn't let him go through it again. He couldn't.

He wouldn't!

He slowly ungrasped his throat in shock. Was that...wh..was that really...? He blinked slowly with his blurred vision as a blue emerald slowly floated down and bumped into his chest gently. His eyes softened as he gently held it.

He tried to chaos control.

He really did.

But he had no air left to utter a single sound. His eyes widened as they fell empty. Clutching the emereld as tightly as he could, his eyes slowly flickered shut. The moon's light shining down on him.

WHOA! I actually wrote a story on my own! 8D Well a prologue anyway XD I dunno, this idea was stuck in my head for a while. After seeing Rise of the Guardians ^^ I wanted to make something similar except Sonic is Jack 8D And Shadow can see him ^^ Although im not sure what the full storyline can be XD

Would someone like to help me plot it abit? Its a Sonadow if you can't tell XD

Also it needs a better name XD
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Skyebloodwillow Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2014
Please finish! Here some ideas.
Shadow could be bunny
Knuckles could be north
Tails could be sandy
Amy could be tooth
Eggman could be pitch 
shadow, knuckles, tails, and Amy save the world from eggman.
instead of a dark age their was a dead age which was a short time that eggman ruled before the guardians( shadow, tails, Amy, and knuckles) defeated him.  
TitaniaSylvette Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
My gawwdd...!!!!! Where's the previous one! I want ti read it!!! Well if there is no previous, CONTINUE THIS STOOOORRRYYY!!! Its so awesome...
Xbox-DS-Gameboy Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD Im trying to figure out the plot ^^;
TitaniaSylvette Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Cant wait! Cant wait! CANT WAIT!!! X3
merlinfrostG Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2014
Please continued this story!!! It's so good!
Xbox-DS-Gameboy Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Once I figure out the plot, I will ^^
AwsomeRainbowDash Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013
Continue plz!! :iconmoarplz: I think Shadow should be the Easter Bunny!!! XD
Xbox-DS-Gameboy Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
AwsomeRainbowDash Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013
The Easter Bunny was serious and short tempered in the movie!!
Xbox-DS-Gameboy Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD Silver would be the SandMan and Tails could be the Tooth Fairy XP
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